Beechenbrook A Rhyme of the War — A Reader’s Guide
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One thought is absorbing, with giant control,-- With deadliest earnest, the national soul:-- "The right of self-government, crown of our pride,-- Right, bought with the sacredest blood,--is denied! Shall we tamely resign what our enemy craves? No! martyrs we _may_ be!--we _cannot_ be slaves!" Fair women who naught but indulgence have seen, Who never have learned what denial could mean,--
Who deign not to clipper their own dainty feet, Whose wants swarthy handmaids stand ready to meet, Whose fingers decline the light kerchief to hem,-- What aid in this struggle is hoped for from them?
Yet see! how they haste from their bowers of ease, Their dormant capacities fired,--to seize Every feminine weapon their skill can command,-- To labor with head, and with heart, and with hand. They stitch the rough jacket, they shape the coarse shirt, Unheeding though delicate fingers be hurt; They bind the strong haversack, knit the grey glove, Nor falter nor pause in their service of love.
When ever were people subdued, overthrown, With women to cheer them on, brave as our own? With maidens and mothers at work on their knees, When ever were soldiers as fearless as these?
June's flower-wreathed sceptre is dropped with a sigh, And forth like an empress steps stately July: She sits all unveiled, amidst sunshine and balms, As Zenobia sat in her City of Palms!
Not yet has the martial horizon grown dun, Not yet has the terrible conflict begun: But the tumult of legions,--the rush and the roar, Break over our borders, like waves on the shore. Along the Potomac, the confident foe Stands marshalled for onset,--prepared, at a blow, To vanquish the daring rebellion, and fling Utter ruin at once on the arrogant thing!
How sovran the silence that broods o'er the sky, And ushers the twenty-first morn of July; --Date, written in fire on history's scroll,-- --Date, drawn in deep blood-lines on many a soul!
There is quiet at Beechenbrook: Alice's brow Is wearing a Sabbath tranquility now, As softly she reads from the page on her knee,-- "Thou wilt keep him in peace who is stayed upon Thee!" When Sophy bursts breathlessly into the room,-- "Oh! mother! we hear it,--we hear it!.., the boom Of the fast and the fierce cannonading!--it shook The ground till it trembled, along by the brook."
One instant the listener sways in her seat,-- The paralysed heart has forgotten to beat; The next, with the speed and the frenzy of fear, She gains the green hillock, and pauses to hear.
Again and again the reverberant sound Is fearfully felt in the tremulous ground; Again and again on their senses it thrills, Like thunderous echoes astray in the hills.
On tip-toe,--the summer wind lifting his hair, With nostril expanded, and scenting the air Like a mettled young war-horse that tosses his mane, And frettingly champs at the bit and the rein,-- Stands eager, exultant, a twelve-year-old boy, His face all aflame with a rapturous joy.
"_That's_ music for heroes in battle array! Oh, mother! I feel like a Roman to-day! The Romans I read of in Plutarch;--Yes, men Thought it noble to die for their liberties then! And I've wondered if soldiers were ever so bold, So gallant and brave, as those heroes of old. --There!--listen!--that volley peals out the reply; They prove it is sweet for their country to die: How grand it must be! what a pride! what a joy! --And _I_ can do nothing: I'm only a boy!"
The fervid hand drops as he ceases to speak, And the eloquent crimson fades out on his cheek.
"Oh, Beverly!--brother! It never would do! Who comforts mamma, and who helps her like you? She sends to the battle her darlingest one,-- She could not give both of them,--husband and son; If she lose _you_, what's left her in life to enjoy? --Oh, no! I am _glad_ you are only a boy." And Sophy looks up with her tenderest air, And kisses the fingers that toy with her hair.
For her, who all silent and motionless stands, And over her heart locks her quivering hands, With white lips apart, and with eyes that dilate, As if the low thunder were sounding her fate,-- What racking suspenses, what agonies stir, What spectres these echoes are rousing for her!
Margaret J. Preston's Beechenbrook: A Rhyme of the War (1866) opens not on a battlefield but in a cottage, where the domestic routine of packing a knapsack becomes the stage for a husband's departure. The poem's diction oscillates between the intimate—'the three-year old baby at play'—and the elevated, as when the chaplain's sermon likens soldiers to 'Greek, in Greece's palmiest days.' This blend of homely detail and classical allusion marks Preston's authorial strategy: she grounds the war's abstract cause in the tangible objects of home—the 'grey dress,' the 'canteen all bright'—while simultaneously framing the conflict as a sacred, even epic, undertaking.
Domestic Objects as Emotional Anchors
Preston repeatedly uses household items to focus grief and duty. In the opening scene, Alice's completed tasks—'The knapsack well furnished, the canteen all bright'—become a litany of loss. The physical objects ('the cap and the sword') stand in for the absent husband, and the child's play with the cap triggers the father's embrace. Later, the chaplain's sermon evokes 'cheerful homes' and 'the old, dear happiness' as what soldiers defend. This technique keeps the war's cost concrete: the 'wreck of the nest' is not a metaphor but a felt reality, tied to 'the birdlings' that remain. By cataloguing what is left behind, Preston makes the reader feel the weight of what is carried into battle.
The Chaplain's Sermon: Rhetoric and Theology
The chaplain's address (section VII) is the poem's longest sustained speech, and it reveals Preston's didactic purpose. He warns that soldiers may 'lose your souls' even while saving their country, contrasting 'the pierced hand of Christ' with 'Moslem heaven'—a pointed sectarian reference. The sermon employs military metaphors for sin: 'a fiercer foe' who 'springs from unseen ambuscades' and 'captive leads the wavering will.' This language transforms the external war into an internal one, urging the troops to become 'soldiers of the Cross.' The rhythm shifts from the poem's usual iambic tetrameter to a ballad stanza, marking the sermon as a distinct rhetorical performance. Preston here merges Confederate nationalism with evangelical Protestantism, presenting spiritual vigilance as the soldier's highest duty.
Dialogue and the Voice of the Child
Archie's brief speech in the opening section is the only child's voice in the excerpts, and it carries disproportionate emotional weight. His words—'Mamma is so sorry!—Mamma is so sad!'—are simple, but they break Alice's composure and prompt the father's embrace. The child's theology is equally direct: 'God keeps his word.' This moment contrasts with the chaplain's elaborate sermon; where the adult voice is complex and exhortatory, the child's is trusting and immediate. Preston uses this juxtaposition to suggest that faith, in its simplest form, is the family's anchor. The child's prayer, reported later, becomes a thread linking domestic piety to the war's outcome.
Rhyme and Meter: The Sound of Sorrow
Preston writes in rhyming couplets of iambic tetrameter, a form that can feel singsong but which she adapts for pathos. The opening lines—'There is sorrow in Beechenbrook Cottage; the day / Has been bright with the earliest glory of May'—set a pattern of contrast between natural cheer and human grief. The couplets often break at the end of a line to isolate a key word: 'All wife-work,—the sweet work that busied her so, / Is finished:—the dear one is ready to go.' The dash and colon create a pause that mimics a caught breath. In the sermon, the meter shifts to a more regular ballad stanza, but elsewhere the couplets allow for quick shifts in tone—from the child's lisp to the mother's silent weeping. The rhyme scheme itself becomes a formal constraint that mirrors the characters' emotional restraint.
Readers approaching Beechenbrook should attend to how Preston balances the public and private registers of war. The poem is neither a battle narrative nor a domestic novel, but a hybrid that uses the cottage as a lens for the camp. Pay particular attention to the moments when objects—a knapsack, a cap—carry more meaning than the characters can speak aloud. The chaplain's sermon, while lengthy, is the poem's theological core; the child's brief lines are its emotional one. Together, they show a writer working to make rhyme bear the weight of a war still raw in memory.
That rainy afternoon, Preston’s grieving mother kept returning to the rhythm of her own stitching, how the ordinary held the unbearable. I sat with that quiet ache long after closing the book, then wandered into Something Else Again — Reading Companion, which met me with a similar gentleness—not explaining the ache, just keeping it company.
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